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Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give a reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#internet #books #air #tickets #groceries
As shopping online
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 more and more popular nowadays, the debate on whether purchasing things through
internet
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a benefit
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benefit
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 or not has been heated. As for as I am concerned, the advantages can overtake the drawbacks.
To begin
 with, online shopping can provide various choices to consumers. As the regional limitation is eliminated once
people
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 online, they can actually buy whatever they like throughout the world.
For example
, citizens do not need to fly to certain countries for buying
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unique items but can select the imported goods on the net.
Therefore
, online shopping
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 customers
opportunity
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 to
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 products and choose the best which
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 their lives and
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 in a higher living standard.
However
, the products may not be reliable on
internet
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the internet
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. In order to make higher profits, sellers will
eaggerate
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exaggerate
 the pros and hide the cons of
it's
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 commodities.
For instance
, photoshop can be done
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lighlighting
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highlighting
 the advantages owing to attract more
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attention
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attentions
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 and purchases.
Therefore
, as the photos are usually the majority judgement of the products, the pictures shown online
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be
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lack
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authenticity if the disadvantages are not fairly introduced to the consumers. Money can be wasted once
people
 find out that the items they received are not the same as they
expcted
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expected
.  In conclusion,
although
people
 may buy
wrong
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 goods online due to
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fake information, it can be
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 prevented by checking the comments and reputation of the firm.
Moreover
 shopping online can indeed benefit
people
 as it
provids
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provides
 more choices and give
people
changes
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chances
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 to
compared
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 the items.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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