For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this give details of how you have benefited from the club explain why you want to leave

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Dear Mr. John, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am Sameer Rana, a golden

membership

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holder at your fitness

club

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. I proceeded with

golden

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the golden

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membership

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over

silver

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the silver

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one because of

additional

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the additional

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facilities it offers like

bring

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bringing

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a friend, swimming and others. I must appreciate the payment system of your

club

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, the

club

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fees automatically

got

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get

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deducted from

credit

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my credit

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card every month.

Initially

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, I joined

this

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club

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just to make myself fit, but

this

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membership

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proved to be very advantageous and improved my whole lifestyle.

Obivious

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Obvious

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benefit is I

got

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get

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fit but there are some other hidden benefits too which never think about. I made

lot

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a lot

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of friends here, my social circle got nearly

quadrauple

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quadruple

quadrupled

foster

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fostered

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my social networking and I

also

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found my hidden talent of swimming here in your

club

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. Unfortunately, my mother is hospitalized in my hometown. She was

diasgonsed

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diagnosed

with the Bird Flu disease. I am planning to visit her and stay there to take care.

Due to

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aforementioned

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the aforementioned

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issue, I have to cancel my

club

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membership

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. Please inform me about any formality or paperwork to cancel my

club

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membership

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. Yours sincerely, Sameer Rana

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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189 words

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