Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Nowadays, Sports is a key factor for all nations to develop their citizens in that field to

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achieve

achive

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achieve

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universal regonisation for their country. Some people

sumrise

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surmise

summarise

that organizing a worldwide sports

event

is positive growth for the

nation

. There are others who reckon that it is a negative way. From my point of

view

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I conjecture that conducting

an

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universal

event

is awful for the country.

To begin

with, while leading a world nations tournaments in their land, citizens of that sand will be

engouraged

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encouraged

and get motivated .

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it will enhance

people

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curiosity to take part in it.

In

addition

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the specific

nation

will get

a

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wide attention because of the huge number involvements of their child, which is the

first

step to

sucess

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success

.

For instance

, in

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rio

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olympics

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all

provinces

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views are in china due to

the

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large number of china people

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who participated

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participated

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in that

event

and they won most of the medals.

On the other hand

, hosting

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universal

event

involve numerous amount and the folks of the

nation

ween that it can be

spilted

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spilt

and utilised for the growth

all

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the

divions

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divisions

division

of that

nation

so that every pillar of that land can be

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benefited

benifited

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benefit

.To illustrate,

recent

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survey shows that till now

india

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did not host a universal competition due to the huge

chulks

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chunks

chalks

of cost. India will spend that amount

in

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all the branches of the fields

such

as healthcare, education, sports ,

transports

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and other things. To sum up ,

high

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expenditure of the

nation

should

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all the trees of that land

not

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a specific ones

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.

With

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this

point,

i

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believe

beleive

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believe

organizing that

event

is not good for the country.