Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that rich

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should help poverty nations during natural climate disasters.

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essay agrees with

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statement because wealthy

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can provide essential

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can make a positive image building all over the world. Floods or other disasters always disadvantage nations looking for aid from developed

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,situation

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can provide all kinds of medical

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, food etc because they have everything already. So they can use that opportunity to help these

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. Recently, a report showed Every year

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spend millions of dollars on poor

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. Bangladesh

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year had a huge flood so the

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send enough medical equipment for Bangladeshi people.

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during covid 19, the

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, Japan , and China send vaccines to Bangladesh. These kinds help normally build a good relationship with each other. Big

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can come up with the idea that they want to build their own image all over the world. These days almost every country doing

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. Many big giant nations are spending billions of dollars to assist poor

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invest money and set up big projects. So

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like the

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, USA, France, China, and Japan succeed to build their own image in the world. The Guardian published news that the USA provided Medical

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in Chittagong to help flooded people.

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news was viral on Facebook and everyone admired

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step. In conclusion, develop

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must help disaster

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because they

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have extra

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they build their own branding.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Humanitarian relief
Infrastructure
Global solidarity
Disproportionately
External assistance
Rebuilding efforts
Disaster response
Investment in stability
Dependency theory
Responsible intervention
Paternalistic
Shared humanity
Sovereignty
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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Public libraries will soon no longer be housed in building as all facilites and books are available for all to access. What are the advantages and disadvantages of public libraries existing online?

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