More and more people are seriously overweight. Some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, the growing rate of

obesity

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and its consequences on individuals’

health

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has become an issue of concern to society. It is obvious that governments in several countries are worried about public

health

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. As a positive approach, in many countries, authorities have decided to increase the

price

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of junk

foods

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which in my opinion is a proper way to tackle

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issue. In the forthcoming paragraphs, we will discuss how

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approach

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other solutions would rescue many lives.

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,

people

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usually decide to eat junk

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not only because of their joy but

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due to their lower

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. In fact, in many cases, fattening

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have a lower

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because they are made of low-quality materials which are not healthy and make

people

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vulnerable to various

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. To explain more, the real victims of

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phenomenon are the

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with the average financial situation who don’t desire to pay a high amount of money for food and unfortunately,

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group constitute the majority of society. As an effective solution, rising the

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of fattening

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would lead

people

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to consider their choices and consume

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with high-quality ingredients.

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, sea

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might have more chance to be selected against fast

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if they have the same

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.

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, there are some other substantial reasons

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as the consumption of cigarettes and alcoholic drinks that would lead

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to be overweight.

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, in recent experiments on

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who suffer from

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and heart

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,

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amount of alcoholic drinks and cigarette consumption is reported.

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, the overuse of these products should be seriously controlled by the authorities. To clarify more, either increasing the

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of these damaging products or prohibition of them might be helpful.

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, psychological

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such

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as anxiety and depression can not be denied as one of the important reasons for

obesity

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. Based on scientific facts, eating too much is a protective guard of the body against anxiety which

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results in overweight. As a matter of fact, every day,

people

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in society face various problems and obstacles which put them under the pressure of life and lead them to anxiety.

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, as another effective solution to decrease the rate of

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obesity

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, it is required that

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organisations provide

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with proper instruction and treatment about psychological

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as one of the major reasons for

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being overweight

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. In conclusion,

obesity

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has become a major problem in many countries. Governments are worried about its serious

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issues and the devastating consequences.Positively, some steps

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as increasing the

price

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of junk

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have been taken

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, they are not enough and more solutions must be approved

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as the prohibition of alcoholic drinks and cigarettes.