Most of the world’s problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree.

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is affecting the sustainability and running of the day-to-day activities.Most

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consider overpopulation as the main cause of

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on the planet to sustain and

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huge burden because it is difficult to sustain,some of the needs they require

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by the number in the community.

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most of the activities offered in the community are not quality since there is much to offer.

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research by the University of Nairobi depicts that 90% of cities are crowded.There is a total decline of spaces for accommodating

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,the huge burden the

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is experiencing is stuffed so with good support and planning the matter can quickly be solved.

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fundamental issue which is in the top gear is

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capacity of the ecosystem,

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indication,the need of the community will not be achievable due to the imbalance.

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Kenyatta University depicts that

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at 70%

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causing global troubles.

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are becoming greedy

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that they have no priority of matter to be attended to

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that service delivery is affected in

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of quality.

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,it is imperative to note that apart from

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drawback,

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the

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