Most of the world’s problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree.

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day

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contemporary

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era,the

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is experiencing

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is affecting the sustainability and running of the day-to-day activities.Most

people

consider overpopulation as the main cause of

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.From my point of view,

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completely agree that there

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too many

people

on the planet to sustain and

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believe

also

that

overconsumption

pray a huge role

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the

world

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problems

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and foremost,too many

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on the planet

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huge burden because it is difficult to sustain,some of the needs they require

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by the number in the community.

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,when there is a huge number of

people

,it

mean

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most of the activities offered in the community are not quality since there is much to offer.

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research by the University of Nairobi depicts that 90% of cities are crowded.There is a total decline of spaces for accommodating

people

.

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,the huge burden the

world

is experiencing is stuffed so with good support and planning the matter can quickly be solved.

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fundamental issue which is in the top gear is

overconsumption

.Resource use has

outspaced

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outpaced

sustainable

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capacity of the ecosystem,

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policy that

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to protect

overuse

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is

nolongerHowever

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no longer however

, with

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indication,the need of the community will not be achievable due to the imbalance.

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research done by

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Kenyatta University depicts that

overconsumption

matter

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at 70%

in

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causing global troubles.

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law

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maker

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are becoming greedy

such

that they have no priority of matter to be attended to

first

.

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,overutilization of resources has caused

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in

whole

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global

world

. To sum up,there is a huge number to sustain in the whole

world

such

that service delivery is affected in

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of quality.

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,it is imperative to note that apart from

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drawback,

overconsumption

also

affect

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the

world

.