Most of the world’s problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree.

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era,the
world
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is affecting the sustainability and running of the day-to-day activities.Most
people
consider overpopulation as the main cause of
world
problem
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problems

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completely agree that there
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too many
people
on the planet to sustain and
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believe
also
that
overconsumption
pray a huge role
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world
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problems
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and foremost,too many
people
on the planet
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a
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huge burden because it is difficult to sustain,some of the needs they require
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by the number in the community.
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,when there is a huge number of
people
,it
mean
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most of the activities offered in the community are not quality since there is much to offer.
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,
a
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research by the University of Nairobi depicts that 90% of cities are crowded.There is a total decline of spaces for accommodating
people
.
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,the huge burden the
world
is experiencing is stuffed so with good support and planning the matter can quickly be solved.
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,
other
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fundamental issue which is in the top gear is
overconsumption
.Resource use has
outspaced
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sustainable
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capacity of the ecosystem,
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policy that
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to protect
overuse
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is
nolongerHowever
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, with
this
indication,the need of the community will not be achievable due to the imbalance.
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,
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research done by
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Kenyatta University depicts that
overconsumption
matter
is
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at 70%
in
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causing global troubles.
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law
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maker
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are becoming greedy
such
that they have no priority of matter to be attended to
first
.
Therefore
,overutilization of resources has caused
imbalance
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an imbalance
the imbalance

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whole
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global
world
. To sum up,there is a huge number to sustain in the whole
world
such
that service delivery is affected in
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of quality.
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,it is imperative to note that apart from
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the aforementioned

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drawback,
overconsumption
also
affect
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the
world
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