In the future, it seems more difficult to live on the Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
think we should invest money
to
in research on other planets to live Change preposition
apply
because
it is will be hard to live on the Change preposition
on because
Earth
in the future. In my opinion, I do not agree with this
statement because of some reasons below.
On the one hand, finding a new planet
to live on is not possible. Until now, only the Earth
has life in the Solar system because it has several suitable conditions to live in such
as temperature and atmosphere. There is no evidence that other planets have any signs of life and the universe's environment is very strict to humans with no gravity and high pressure. Besides
, human technology is not adapted with
to/for universe exploration. Because of limited technical development, Change preposition
apply
people
only have launched some satellites and spaceships to collect some samples and conditions around our planet
to research the affection from space to the Earth
. Additionally
, the farthest distance humans reach is from the Earth
to the moon because our spaceships have
not enough power to get Add a missing verb
do have
further
, therefore
, to reach a planet
such
as Mars, with the distance counted by light-years, is impossible.
Instead
of investing money
to find a new planet
, people
should spend it to make positive changes on the Earth
. People
should invest money
to create materials which are friendly with
to the environment to replace some toxic materials Change preposition
apply
such
as plastic, which causes causing marine pollution. Electrical transportation should be used to replace vehicles running on fossil fuel,
and is a positive way to reduce emissions. Remove the comma
apply
Besides
that, the birth-rate
should be controlled by governments and individuals to decrease the burden on the Correct your spelling
birth rate
Earth
because resources such
as food and water are limited, especially accommodations.
In conclusion, I believe that humans should invest money
to improve our environment first
, .
after that, we can explore the universe to find a new home for our kind, on other planets.Change the punctuation
,
.
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