In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the modern era, the
internet
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, the mobile phone and
computer
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is a wonderful invention by science and technology and it is very helpful to humankind. In the upcoming future, everybody read the newspapers and magazines on the online platform which caused, no one to purchase printed books. I strongly agree with
this
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statement and I will discuss it in the upcoming paragraphs.
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with, nowadays the
internet
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is not too costly which caused, every
people
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buy the
internet
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package because it has
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of advantages
especially
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those who want to read the newspapers and books.
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, several humankind
do
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not like to read the
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newspaper
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news paper
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newspaper
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because of
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the black
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and white
color
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colour
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. Whereas,
at
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on
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the online platform they can read with
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colourful
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content
containt
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content
as well as they can watch
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live videos.
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, many
people
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facinat
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fascinated
facing
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towards the online platform.
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, several
community
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do not like to take
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paper or
book
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books
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with
him
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them
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.
Although
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, the mobile phone is easy to take. That's why
people
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purchase the
internet
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pack and read the newspaper
with
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full of interest.
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, we know about the books and the
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newspaper
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news paper
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newspaper
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pages made by the trees
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it is harmful
for
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to
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our environment.
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, in the
present
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day
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global warming effect
bloom
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the bloom
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on
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of
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the earth because of
lack
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the lack
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of trees. If
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society
save
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the trees
then
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it will
helpful
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our planet and community. Are
people
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use
the
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E-book
instead
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of newspapers? Yes, of course,
human
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humans
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should use the
E-book
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e-books
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because it has
beneficial
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benefits
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for the planet. In conclusion, E-learning like
internet
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reading is very helpful to
the
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apply
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people
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because it is very cheap and eco-friendly so
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every
people
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must use E-books.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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