Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Railway
and road
services
are the most Correct your spelling
popular
poplular
transition in the Correct your spelling
popular
worlds
. Some citizens say that bureaucracy should Fix the agreement mistake
world
use
more money
to develop railways
systems than Change the noun form
railway
roads
structures. Change the noun form
road
However
, I think that administrations should use
the same amount of money
on both railways and roads
.
To begin
with, Correct your spelling
governments
government
goverments
should expend capital Correct your spelling
governments
to
Change preposition
on
railway
departments to elevation rail systems because it provides the opportunity to reach destination
Add an article
the destination
a destination
quickly
than Correct quantifier usage
more quickly
roads
. Change preposition
on roads
In addition
, railway
services
has
less possibility Change the verb form
have
to
Change preposition
of
occurs
accidents as compared with Wrong verb form
occur
road
transports
. People can go Fix the agreement mistake
transport
one
Change preposition
from one
railway
station to another to
more speedily and safely than Change preposition
apply
road
vechiles
which may Correct your spelling
vehicles
helps
to save their valuable Change the verb form
help
time
and lifeAdd the comma(s)
, as a result,
as a result
they can use
the time
in another
Replace the adjective
other
works
with full of Fix the agreement mistake
work
attentions
. Fix the agreement mistake
attention
This
may lead to prosper their way of lives
. In Bangladesh, Fix the agreement mistake
life
for example
, peoples
can go Fix the agreement mistake
people
Dhaka
to Sylhet using railways within two hours whereas using Change preposition
from Dhaka
roads
it
is needed six-seven hours. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, evidence supports that in
Change preposition
apply
last
month in
the same route occurred seven major accidents according to Daily Star - a leading newspaper in BD - while there is no incidents in rail systems in that Change preposition
on
time
. Therefore
, governments must spend money
on rail-line services
.
On the other hand
, Add an article
the authority
authority
should Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
also
expense funds to improve structures
of Correct article usage
the structures
road
cause using Fix the agreement mistake
roads
roads
to go one
place to another is the most popular transport in the Change preposition
from one
worlds
. Group of individuals can go out in any place including long journey or Fix the agreement mistake
world
short
journey in any Add an article
a short
time
by roads
whereas railway
system depends on a particular time
resulting in they have to wait for this
time
possible leading to affect badly in certain cases on people's life. For instance
, if a person suddenly feel
ill and Change the verb form
feels
have
to go Correct subject-verb agreement
has
hospital
immediately, Change preposition
to hospital
that
Change preposition
at that
time
he/she has to use
road
vechiles
Correct your spelling
vehicles
such
as ambulance
or others, but he/she cannot Correct article usage
an ambulance
use
rail service at that moment. For these reason
, there is Change the determiner
this reason
these reasons
also
need
to spend capital on Correct article usage
a need
roads
.
In conclusion, railway
stations and road
services
are both important for a nation. So, I think administrations should use
the same money
in both sectors to prosper their infrastructure.Submitted by ahmedshahriar448 on
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