some people think the spread of multinational companies and globilization produce positive outcomes for everyone. do you agree or disagree with the statement.

Over the years,

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globalization

globilization

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globalisation

and

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spread

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of multinational group

has

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improved the economy so far. A few numbers of individual thinks that the

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of multinational groups and

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globilization

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has a better benefit. in

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eassy

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essay

i

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am in agreement with the

above stated

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notion.

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introduction of

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globalization

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globalisation

and multinational

companies

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creates

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an opportunity

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opportunity

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opportunities

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for employment at a larger scale thereby minimizing

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level amongst youth ,

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the introduction of MTN telecommunication into Nigeria has given IT students room for employment.

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,

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of multinational

group

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groups

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and

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globilization

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down to the local area has

create

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an 'eye

opener'

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.

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it has widened the knowledge in the use of modern technology and

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funds are been raised to carry out some infrastructural

project

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such

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good

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supply of adequate water, and construction of

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road

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.

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,

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the spread

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of multinational

company

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companies

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and

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globilization

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enhances

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good communication amongst people from

different

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ethnic

region

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, learning

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different cultures and traditions.

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, it has its' own negative effect on some local area because people

prefers

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to go for foreign products rather than locally produced ones. In summary , the

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of

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globalization

globilization

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globalisation

and multinational groups is of a better benefit than the negative view of it .