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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT THE SPREAD OF MULTINATIONAL COMPANIES AND GLOBALIZATION PRODUCE POSITIVE OUTCOMES FOR WVWERYONE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT.

#people #spread #companies #globalization #outcomes #wvweryone
Over the world, globalization and the
spread
 of cross-national
groups
has
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enhance
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 the economy so far. I totally agree
to
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this
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statement
statment
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statement
. In the era of today, globalization has
empower
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 youths with more job
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opportunities
oportunities
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opportunities
 and with
this
, it has reduced
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unemployment
umemployment
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unemployment
 which has caused a lot of
havock
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havoc
 in some societies.
for example
 since the time Nigeria and South Africa
has
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 accepted to work together in the expansion of their MTN telecommunication , the forum for employment has really been
at
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 the increase.
Furthermore
, globalization has really channelled
development
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 of infrastructure towards the rural areas
this
also
have
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has
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enhance
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 proper communication within other ethnic
groups
.
furthermore
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 exchange of ideas and
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knowledge
knowlege
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knowledge
 amongst
people
 is enriched . the
spread
 of multinational companies creates
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an opportunity
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opportunity
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opportunities
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 for
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construction
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contruction
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construction
 of
good
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road
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 for conveying products to different locations.
On the other hand
, the
spread
 of multinational
groups
 has made individuals living
at
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the
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rural area
to
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have
a
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conducive and easy
asscessibilty
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accessibility
with
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 the use of technology .
for
example
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 since the introduction of mobile
phone
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phones
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people
at
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in
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 the local and urban
area
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areas
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 can communicate with each other without the stress of exchanging letters.
Also
, due to the interaction between different
people
 from ethnic
region
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regions
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team work
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teamwork
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 can be achieved and
varrities
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varieties
 of food can be produced and distributed to countries far and near.
Not withstanding
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, the
spread
 of multinational
groups
 can cause
a negative effects
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negative effects
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 on the
people
 who
runs
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local
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 group
at
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 the rural region
this
 development will definitely affect their stock in the market.
for example
,
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number of persons would prefer foreign
product
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products
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than
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 locally produced ones' In summary, the
spread
 of multinational companies has really
enhance
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 a lot in
people
's
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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 and
mode
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modes
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 of living.
this
 is of more benefit than
the
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downside.
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