Some people claim that what people eat in many Western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet. What are your opinions on this?

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There is widespread concern about the
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of
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. Some
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claim that what
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eat is unhealthy, and it is getting worse, especially in many Western countries. There is no doubt I will jump to the side of critics. I do find the dominant
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in most countries is an unhealthy
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. Given the fact that these days as we have seen changes in the structure of families are constantly occurring: from extended family to nuclear family and
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in modern life two-income family is rife, so it is so hard for members to have a healthy
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. Since they do not have enough time on cooking, the
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option for them is prepared
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in the form of frozen, restaurant, and fast
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, where
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and nutrition are being prepared with unhealthy ingredients,
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as oily
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and spicy
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with inferior quality. Across the cities, there are a huge diversity of restaurants and fast
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. So that there is a huge competition between them to get more attention and clients. To entice
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to try their menu they are using
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with primary ingredients that with a superficial look seem, gourmet, while they are a large threat to human health.
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, with
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type of
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and lifestyle
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dominant to
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, sure it will be followed by grand issues like diseases. No wonder today's world struggling with obesity. There will be consequences
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as blood pressure, heartbeat, and fatty liver. They are a large menace and
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a wake-up call for humans and the
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generation. As soon as possible the government and officials along with the company of
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should take strict measures to change these conditions. In conclusion, In my view,
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concern about the common
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in the world especially in Western countries makes sense. The only way to help eradicate
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problem and
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the key to good health is changing the lifestyle of
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and getting a balanced
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along with exercise. I am one of the critics of
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and looking forward to improving my
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.
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