Some people claim that what people eat in many Western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet. What are your opinions on this?

There is widespread concern about the
diet
of
people
. Some
people
claim that what
people
eat is unhealthy, and it is getting worse, especially in many Western countries. There is no doubt I will jump to the side of critics. I do find the dominant
diet
in most countries is an unhealthy
diet
. Given the fact that these days as we have seen changes in the structure of families are constantly occurring: from extended family to nuclear family and
also
in modern life two-income family is rife, so it is so hard for members to have a healthy
diet
. Since they do not have enough time on cooking, the
first
option for them is prepared
foods
in the form of frozen, restaurant, and fast
foods
, where
foods
and nutrition are being prepared with unhealthy ingredients,
such
as oily
foods
and spicy
foods
with inferior quality. Across the cities, there are a huge diversity of restaurants and fast
foods
. So that there is a huge competition between them to get more attention and clients. To entice
people
to try their menu they are using
foods
with primary ingredients that with a superficial look seem, gourmet, while they are a large threat to human health.
Thus
, with
this
type of
diet
and lifestyle
that is
dominant to
people
, sure it will be followed by grand issues like diseases. No wonder today's world struggling with obesity. There will be consequences
such
as blood pressure, heartbeat, and fatty liver. They are a large menace and
also
a wake-up call for humans and the
next
generation. As soon as possible the government and officials along with the company of
people
should take strict measures to change these conditions. In conclusion, In my view,
this
concern about the common
diet
in the world especially in Western countries makes sense. The only way to help eradicate
this
problem and
also
the key to good health is changing the lifestyle of
people
and getting a balanced
diet
along with exercise. I am one of the critics of
this
new
diet
and looking forward to improving my
diet
.
Submitted by miladsabbaghi on

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