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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reduce accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.

#people #punishments #offences #accidents #measures #road #safety
It is
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certainly true that
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 number of
road
accidents
 have been increased these days.
This
 could be due to
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 reckless driving of the drivers or an unsafe
road
 situation. Some people believe that to prevent
this
 kind of
incidents
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, there should be some rigorous
traffic
 rules to be imposed so
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the driver
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driver
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drivers
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 will be afraid to commit driving violations. In my view, there are many
road
accidents
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 place due to unsafe conditions
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 the roads so these should be improved to avoid or minimize
further
accidents
. On the one hand, some people argue that
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raise
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 in the penalty for
traffic
 violations could be efficient to control
road
accident
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accidents
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. They support their view with the argument that vehicle
operator
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operators
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 would drive more carefully to avoid any
traffic
 charges
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a
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breaking the law.
For example
, recently,
Dubai
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traffic
 directory has introduced a new penal code which states
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 in the charges against bridging any
traffic
 rules. Since
then
,
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 has reported a smaller number of
accidents
 which is an apparent success of the
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.
On the other hand
, I recognize that enhancing the existing
road
 system could be a more effective way to minimize
further
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accidents
. There are many ways to upgrade the
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motor ways
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such
 as installing the proper
road
 signages, caution boards and many more to warn drivers about the hazard on the
road
 and they should drive their vehicles more cautiously to avoid vehicle
collision
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. To illustrate, the Dubai
traffic
 control system has installed many new warning notices on the narrow residential streets to avoid
unwanted
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accident
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.
As a result
, they have recorded the declination in the incidents around the area where new caution signages
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 been installed. In conclusion,
although
 increasing
in
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the level of
traffic
 violation charges could be proven
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as
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good
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 implement, in my view,
to restructure
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road
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 system could be more effective to reduce the number of
road
accidents
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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