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IN ANY CASE, EDUCATION IS VERY IMPORTANT IN EVERYONE’S LIFE

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STEP ON THE ROAD TO SUCCESS. ONE WIDELY HELD OPINION IS THAT

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SHOULD BE ASSIGNED DAILY

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WHILE THERE ARE OTHERS WHO THINK THAT

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TENDENCY IS UNNECESSARY. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THE FORMER NOTION AND

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ESSAY WILL

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HIGHLIGHT THE BENEFITS OF DAILY

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AND AFTER THAT MENTION THE DRAWBACKS AS WELL. ON THE ONE HAND, BEING ASSIGNED LOTS OF

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CAN MAKE TEENAGERS FEEL OVERWHELMED AND HINDER THEM FROM BEING SUCCESSFUL ARTISTS. TO AN EXTENT, A YOUNGSTER WHO WANTS TO PRACTICE FOR HER MUSIC COURSE AND ENJOY THE TIME

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MAY GET DRAWN TO BIOLOGY

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. AS AN INEVITABLE CONSEQUENCE, THE GIRL WOULD PICK

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INSTEAD

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OF SPARING TIME ON HER MUSIC, IN ORDER TO BE SUCCESSFUL AT

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INSTEAD

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OF BEING A GOOD MUSICIAN. IF

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COULD BE FREER IN THEIR

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LIFE, WE WOULD SEE MORE ARTISTS EMERGE.

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, NOT ONLY DOES HAVING DAILY ASSIGNMENTS PROVIDE

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WITH HOW THEY CAN BE DISCIPLINED, BUT

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AIDS THEM TO LEARN DEEPLY. IN ORDER TO ACCOMPLISH TASKS, STUDYING AT HOME CAN RETURN TO A DAILY ROUTINE AND THEY REPEAT WHAT THEY LEARN AT THE

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FOR INSTANCE

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, WHEN

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CONFUSE ABOUT A FORMULA IN MATHS AT

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, WHILE THEY ARE TRYING TO COMPLETE THEIR

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, THEY WILL HAVE TO RESEARCH MORE ABOUT THAT FORMULA. IF THERE WERE NO

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WOULD BE ABLE TO PASS THE TOPIC WITH A LACK OF KNOWLEDGE. TO CONCLUDE,

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THERE ARE SOME DISADVANTAGES OF HAVING DAILY ASSIGNMENTS, THEY CONTRIBUTE TO LEARNING DEEPLY AND CREATE A DISCIPLINE FOR YOUNG PEOPLE. BECAUSE OF THESE ADVANTAGES,

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SHOULD BE A PART OF THE DAILY ROUTINE OF A LEARNER.

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

293 words

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Many teachers assign homework to students everyday. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students?

Fully explain your ideas

There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food. Yet this is necessary if we are to meet the demands often increasing world population. Give your opinions on this.

The gap between rich and poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle this.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities ,so the population in the country side is decreasing. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

Some people think that younger people are not suitable for important positions in government. Others think that it will be a good idea for younger people to take on these positions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.