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Many teachers assign homework to students everyday. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students?

#teachers #homework #students
IN ANY CASE, EDUCATION IS VERY IMPORTANT IN EVERYONE’S LIFE
IN ADDITION
 TO BEING THE
FIRST
 STEP ON THE ROAD TO SUCCESS. ONE WIDELY HELD OPINION IS THAT
STUDENTS
 SHOULD BE ASSIGNED DAILY
HOMEWORK
 WHILE THERE ARE OTHERS WHO THINK THAT
THIS
 TENDENCY IS UNNECESSARY. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THE FORMER NOTION AND
THIS
 ESSAY WILL
FIRST
 HIGHLIGHT THE BENEFITS OF DAILY
HOMEWORK
 AND AFTER THAT MENTION THE DRAWBACKS AS WELL. ON THE ONE HAND, BEING ASSIGNED LOTS OF
HOMEWORK
 CAN MAKE TEENAGERS FEEL OVERWHELMED AND HINDER THEM FROM BEING SUCCESSFUL ARTISTS. TO AN EXTENT, A YOUNGSTER WHO WANTS TO PRACTICE FOR HER MUSIC COURSE AND ENJOY THE TIME
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 MAY GET DRAWN TO BIOLOGY
HOMEWORK
. AS AN INEVITABLE CONSEQUENCE, THE GIRL WOULD PICK
HOMEWORK
INSTEAD
 OF SPARING TIME ON HER MUSIC, IN ORDER TO BE SUCCESSFUL AT
SCHOOL
INSTEAD
 OF BEING A GOOD MUSICIAN. IF
STUDENTS
 COULD BE FREER IN THEIR
SCHOOL
 LIFE, WE WOULD SEE MORE ARTISTS EMERGE.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, NOT ONLY DOES HAVING DAILY ASSIGNMENTS PROVIDE
STUDENTS
 WITH HOW THEY CAN BE DISCIPLINED, BUT
ALSO
 AIDS THEM TO LEARN DEEPLY. IN ORDER TO ACCOMPLISH TASKS, STUDYING AT HOME CAN RETURN TO A DAILY ROUTINE AND THEY REPEAT WHAT THEY LEARN AT THE
SCHOOL
.
FOR INSTANCE
, WHEN
STUDENTS
 CONFUSE ABOUT A FORMULA IN MATHS AT
SCHOOL
, WHILE THEY ARE TRYING TO COMPLETE THEIR
HOMEWORK
, THEY WILL HAVE TO RESEARCH MORE ABOUT THAT FORMULA. IF THERE WERE NO
HOMEWORK
,
STUDENTS
 WOULD BE ABLE TO PASS THE TOPIC WITH A LACK OF KNOWLEDGE. TO CONCLUDE,
ALTHOUGH
 THERE ARE SOME DISADVANTAGES OF HAVING DAILY ASSIGNMENTS, THEY CONTRIBUTE TO LEARNING DEEPLY AND CREATE A DISCIPLINE FOR YOUNG PEOPLE. BECAUSE OF THESE ADVANTAGES,
HOMEWORK
 SHOULD BE A PART OF THE DAILY ROUTINE OF A LEARNER.
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