When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent you agree or disagree with the statement? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your argument with examples and relevant evidence
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notion. According to me, there is no doubt that we are losing our traditional skills. In the below paragraph, I will explain my perspective which will lead to a logical conclusion.
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and forementioned one will be the way we communicate with our family and friends. I observe that there is a drastic change in the way we communicate. Linking Words
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, in the earlier days, we have to meet our family in person on any occasion to celebrate the festival and get blessings from parents and relatives due to which we had rich family values. Linking Words
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modern technological advancement, we do communicate using video calls and messaging services due to which we lost the sharing emotions and valuing humans.
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to that, technology growth makes us compromise our health. If we keep a close eye on the population, we could observe that people using technology devices has increased numerously in the past decade. Linking Words
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, people depend on digital devices to take care of their health. They need automation to notify them that they need to consume water and they need to walk more in order to be healthy which says that we forget our traditional way of consuming food and it has made us work by forgetting the outer world.
To conclude, technological advancement has helped the world and human lives to a greater extent. Linking Words
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, we need to keep an eye on our traditional skills which will enrich our family values and health.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite