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Some parents believe that cell phone are harmful to children,while other disagree.Discuss both side and give your opinion.

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With the development of technology in the
last
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 few decades, people have become more dependent on devices like
cell
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phones
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 or tablets.
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, nowadays some
parents
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 give
cell
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phones
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 to their
children
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 at a young age, while other families claim that these devices are harmful to them. In the following ,paragraphs I will discuss both points of view and
then
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 reach a solid conclusion. Generally,
children
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 of
this
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 generation ask for cellphones as a gift to their relatives on their birthdays because at
this
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 age it is very important to fit into today's society ,
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nevertheless
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 some people believe that wireless telephones are very dangerous these days.
For instance
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,
children
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 can play video games or watch Youtube videos all day long
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 of doing homework, they can learn
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inappropriate language, and even they can reveal their identity to strangers. Some individuals claim that
children
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 under 15 years do not have the necessity of owning a
cell
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 phone.
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, a certain number of
parents
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 agree with giving their sons or daughters
cell
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phones
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. They think that it could be beneficial to them to learn good content on social media,
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 as YouTube Kids, or other educational apps, like Duolingo or Science360, among others.
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,
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 think
that is
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 an excellent way of getting independence because not only
children
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 can call their
parents
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, in any ,case it is needed, but
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 they must be responsible for these devices. In conclusion, in my opinion,
children
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 should have
cell
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phones
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 to communicate with their
parents
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 in any rough case, but I
also
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 think that
parents
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 must supervise their kids by controlling the apps they are using or just limiting some other apps. Clearly, a balance is
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key to the development of these
children
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.
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