The restoration of old buildings in major cities throughout the world often involves numerous government expenditures. This money will bring more benefits if it is used to provide new housing or road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the new era, more and more

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have been built to serve the population growth.

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, in the

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these

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in enormous municipalities around the earth will need to be upgraded and it will strongly affect government finance, in lieu of fixing old structures

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expenditure can assist to supply more accommodation and

roadway

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to create

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convenient

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for citizens. From my point of view, I partly disagree that old

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will be abandoned and collapsed for some reasons I mentioned below.

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with, Old structures

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as

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that are national and characteristic of those territories must be kept and restored, Especially edifices that are symbolic and are the face of countries related to diplomacy and political development.

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, the

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related to religion

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as pagodas and churches are

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crucial to reinstate and preserve.

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, the Giza pyramid should be regenerated to keep the ancient and the mystery of

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historical construct.

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, expenditure

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Fixing edifices

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an arm and a leg so

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religious and symbolic ones should be prioritized for repair. Meanwhile, with modernization and urbanization, more and more demand for places of residence for citizens. People enjoy working and living in new modern

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inside the

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of the metropolitan area convenient for commuting and shopping

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as towers, skyscrapers and luxury apartments. These

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help people with limited income have the opportunity to buy a home for them

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of having to buy expensive plots of land and

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build a house.

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, the

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in big cities that we often see are filled with high-rise

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competing to

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because vacant land is increasingly rare.

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, the state should spend investment funds to develop more and more modern urban areas to respond to the fast pace of life in today's era. In conclusion, the Government should use expenditures for fabricating new homes and routes to expand opportunities

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buying houses for residents. And

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repair important historical

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of the countries.