The restoration of old buildings in major cities throughout the world often involves numerous government expenditures. This money will bring more benefits if it is used to provide new housing or road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the new era, more and more
buildings
have been built to serve the population growth. Besides
, in the future
these Add a comma
,future
buildings
in enormous municipalities around the earth will need to be upgraded and it will strongly affect government finance, in lieu of fixing old structures this
expenditure can assist to supply more accommodation and roadway
to create Fix the agreement mistake
roadways
a
Correct article usage
apply
convenient
for citizens. From my point of view, I partly disagree that old Replace the word
convenience
buildings
will be abandoned and collapsed for some reasons I mentioned below.
To begin
with, Old structures such
as buildings
that are national and characteristic of those territories must be kept and restored, Especially edifices that are symbolic and are the face of countries related to diplomacy and political development. Moreover
, the buildings
related to religion such
as pagodas and churches are also
crucial to reinstate and preserve. For example
, the Giza pyramid should be regenerated to keep the ancient and the mystery of this
historical construct. Hence
, expenditure of
Fixing edifices Change preposition
on
cost
an arm and a leg so Correct subject-verb agreement
costs
that
religious and symbolic ones should be prioritized for repair.
Meanwhile, with modernization and urbanization, more and more demand for places of residence for citizens. People enjoy working and living in new modern Correct determiner usage
apply
buildings
inside the center
of the metropolitan area convenient for commuting and shopping Change the spelling
centre
such
as towers, skyscrapers and luxury apartments. These buildings
help people with limited income have the opportunity to buy a home for them instead
of having to buy expensive plots of land and then
build a house. For instance
, the buildings
in big cities that we often see are filled with high-rise buildings
competing to rise
because vacant land is increasingly rare. Change the verb form
rising
Therefore
, the state should spend investment funds to develop more and more modern urban areas to respond to the fast pace of life in today's era.
In conclusion, the Government should use expenditures for fabricating new homes and routes to expand opportunities of
buying houses for residents. And Change preposition
for
also
repair important historical buildings
of the countries.Submitted by daisyle1811 on
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