Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. P

Public

health

is getting more and more

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in everyday life of society and increasing the number of

sports

facilities is considered to improve it.

Although

this

is not the only way and panacea since other measures are required. In my opinion, all opportunities that can be implemented into reality are necessary to take into account. I will support

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view with the arguments in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, planning and building

sports

facilities

such

as

sports

pavilions, stadiums, gymnasiums,

health

spas, boxing arenas, swimming pools, roller and ice rinks, billiard halls, bowling alleys, and other similar places definitely modernize and develop residential areas. Having access to appropriate infrastructure citizens will be able to attend it and do any kind of physical activity as well as take their children to

sport

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clubs in order to develop their physical strength and endurance.

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, it will raise

the

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interest in

sports

and popularize

the

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healthy lifestyle among all

age

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and social groups.

On the other hand

, it is widely believed that building infrastructure is an expensive thing and not every community or even state can allow

such

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.

Thus

, other possibilities to improve public

health

can be in

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of government and local authorities.

Therefore

, an information campaign with opinion leaders, experts or local activists to reduce negative habits or

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debunk medical myths seems a realistic idea.

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people means

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destructive

behavior

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and

spreading

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illnesses

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in the future.

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, the launch and implementation of the pro-vaccination campaign in 2020-2021 was tough but rewarding work against

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so called

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anti-vaccinators that dispelled doubts of people to vaccinate and ruined fakes about COVID-19 and public immunization. Eventually, the number of deaths

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decreased, and

moreover

, a healthy environment

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society was ensured.

Hence

, I am absolutely convinced that the ways to improve public

health

that were mentioned must be incorporated as a sustainable system both applied and informational that works to maintain collective immunity, healthy parenting and environment, and a responsible attitude to one’s own and community

health

.