Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement.
Nowadays, the more developing science and technology are, the more advanced
children
's lives become. Besides
clothes and ,knowledge
they are Add an article
the knowledge
also
concerned about lifestyle. It is argued that these days, children
have a harmful lifestyle and both schools
and parents
are responsible for this
problem. Personally, I am convinced by the idea for some reasons mentioned in this
essay.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons that show that schools
are responsible for solving this
problem. Firstly
, schools
are where the children
spend almost time in a day. So the teacher is easier to guide children
. Secondly
, the children
tend to listen
the advice of their teacher more than others. Add the preposition
tolisten
For instance
, my sister always follows the teacher's advice that she has to sleep after 10p.m every day.
On the other hand
, parents
aspect the children
. Parents
do not have enough time to care for their children
but they understand children
what they like and what they hate. Firstly
, parents
have a lot of time to cook breakfast, lunch and also
dinner so the children
often eat fast - food
or some food
that is
a little delicious. The research of Hanoi National University shows that about 40 per cent of children
at Nguyen Hue high school have breakfast unhealthy. Secondly
, parents
so believe in their children
and do not follow them. As a ,result the children
eat food
that is
not organic and does not exercise and also
live unhealthily. For example
, parents
take a little money for children
to purchase some healthy food
for a break but they use the money to play games.
In conclusion, I am persuaded by the idea that to solve the unhealthy lifestyle of the children
need to help schools
and parent'sSubmitted by trandung09091999 on
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