People living in 21st century have a better life quality than the people who lived in the previous centuries.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
More and more
people
tend to believe that we now have a better quality of life than in the past because of the improvement of our society in many aspects. Personally, I completely agree with this
idea and
With the development and innovation of medical research and medical treatment, it is true that we are suffering less from certain types of diseases and expect to live longer. Additionally
, people
now are able to do something preventative rather than something curative instead
because of the growing awareness of general health. So that we are less likely to get ill and could enjoy life with our family or friends or do what we really like. For example
, it is scientifically proven that almost 80% of cancer now can be cured in its early stage with advanced screening methods.
Meanwhile, our society is becoming much more peaceful and people
treat each other kindly. Less than a hundred years ago, there are constant wars or fights among most countries for various reasons. Nowadays many tools can be used for people
to get a better understanding of exotic issues, such
as their cultures and beliefs, and people
from different backgrounds. Being exposed to different people
and different cultures, the general public throughout the whole world can form a stronger connection. For instance
, more and more people
are located in different countries throughout the world,and I often catch sight of some foreigners when I shop in the mall.
To conclude, with no more pain and suffering among the patients and mutual acceptance in the world as a whole,we believe that we are living a better life.Submitted by 980907152 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite