Some say that news has no connection with most people’s lives and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

#say #news #connection #people’s #lives #waste #time #newspapers #television #programs

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

A number of people think that there is no connection between

Use synonyms

news

Correct article usage

the news

show examples

and their lives so they should not waste their time reading newspapers or watching

Use synonyms

news

Add an article

the news

show examples

on television. I strongly disagree with it because there are many benefits of keeping informed of

news

Use synonyms

in our lives.

News

Use synonyms

is undeniably important for us in many aspects. One aspect of it is the weather forecast. By knowing the prediction of today's weather or the following week's weather, it would help us to plan our activities. If it is forecast to have a storm in a place where we plan to visit, we could postpone it.

Besides

Linking Words

news

Use synonyms

reports can be educational.

For example

Linking Words

, when

news

Use synonyms

stories on cybercrime are reported in newspapers, people would become more conscious of

such

Linking Words

scams and so they would be more cautious when conducting transactions. Through the media

such

Linking Words

as television

news

Use synonyms

channels, we can get informed of what is happening around the world and take necessary actions.

For instance

Linking Words

, in 2019, when there were Covid-19 cases

initially

Linking Words

found in China, other countries could get prepared to combat the virus in advance.

As a result

Linking Words

, in some countries, the number of death cases could be reduced.

Additionally

Linking Words

, by following the

news

Use synonyms

, we could know what problems our countries are facing in terms of financial or economic situations.

Consequently

Linking Words

, we could manage our spending

accordingly

Linking Words

. To sum up,

Use synonyms

news

Add an article

the news

show examples

does have an impact on people’s lives directly and indirectly.

Therefore

Linking Words

, reading or watching

Use synonyms

news

Add an article

the news

show examples

should not be considered a waste of time.

Instead

Linking Words

, we should appreciate the benefits of being informed of what is happening around us.

Submitted by yi.jun.smile26 on Mon Oct 24 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

11
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

270 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advatnages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
We will start to taking about is this good message or not? maybe the family thinking when you will talk with your childern and said that for them they take a positive energy or maybe they and encourage them to try to do anything and find what they like to do.
4
band
In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around.
Most metropolitan city, it is growing numerous people who are not known their bordering resident and then feeling of community is lost. There two main factors are the lifestyle and busy time. To overcome this address are, the first one is the government make social organization. The second is making lottery club.
6
band
Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there is a growing tendency for communities in urban areas to prefer to move to rural spaces. I personally agree with the view that living in the countryside will have its advantages.
5.5
band
(QG) In some cities public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There is an increasing number of public gardens for locals to grow their crops replacing public areas such as parks in many cities. This phenomenon has its own drawbacks in environmental problems and crime that can overshadow the benefit of having fresh food.
5
band
Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Every school subject brings different knowledge, experience and skills to pupils. Some people argue that learning History should be the first and foremost fields at school. Others believe that in nowadays, on this quickly changed modern world there is another subjects, like Science and Technology which pupils should pay attention more than History.

Some say that news has no connection with most people’s lives and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advatnages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around.

Some peoole think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

(QG) In some cities public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?