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Some people say that it is a waste of time to focus on future and important to focus on present. To what extent do u agree or disagree ?

#people #waste #time #focus #future
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 management and planning are the key parameters to achieving long-term prosperity. Present-
time
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 success generally does not evolve from current activities, whereas they are the results of activities , efforts , planning and
time
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 management that have been taken care of in the past. It has disagreed to the larger extent that to focus on the
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 is waste of
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. The upcoming paragraphs outline the necessity of investing
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 in the
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 by exemplifying their impact on science and technology and
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 with, Science and technology, require always 20 years ahead of thinking to create an impactful
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. Any successful technology of tomorrow
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 required strong brainstorming and huge
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 and money investment in today's scientific studies.
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, if we want to make fossil-free fuels, we need to think of an alternate option far before their scarcity on the earth.
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, need to think in advance , about what could be the possible alternative and how can it sustain. Overall, there is a specific plan and study required in well advance for the
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 , in terms of
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 investment is considered
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 planning is necessary to succeed in the long run.
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, if some companies invested all of their money in the oil
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 , they can get maximum money today. But, if there is any change in govt . the policy makes them collapse.
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, for a sustainable
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, it is necessary to spend
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 on
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 activities and parallel investment for
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 opportunities. In conclusion, spending
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 for the
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 is always necessary to maintain sustainable development. In fact, present activity in turn associated with the
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. One shouldn't separate these two aspects.
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, it has to go in parallel to achieve a successful story.
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