It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as South Pole. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With the innovation in technology, researchers and travellers can visit the far place that in the past was not possible. Undoubtedly, the benefits are more than the negatives, it would help to
further
research on the natural fauna and flora that would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
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and foremost advantage is that scientists can do more research on nature which will be beneficial to know the changes in the environment in recent years. Linking Words
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, they would be successful to find the possible reasons for increasing global warming. Linking Words
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, according to the recent test in the South pole region, after the 20th ,century there was a major change shown in the layers of ice, it was compatibly thin as compared to previous centuries. As a consequence, it would be easier to understand the factors that contributed for rising in the level of global warming.
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, there are some disadvantages with the tests in untouched areas that could disturb the life of animals who are living there. Linking Words
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, some of the species has on the verge of extinction. Linking Words
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, in a recent survey, the polar bear has been declared endangered. Linking Words
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research will disturb their lives.
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have a negative impact on the life of the rare species that are living there.Linking Words
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