Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and will use up resources. Do you agree or disagree?

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air

crafts are one of

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human’s

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creations that

has

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significantly changed their lives. Proponents of

this

invention claim that

air

travel should be limited as

the

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fossil fuels are about to be diminished and it

also

is one source of

air

pollution.

However

, I entirely disagree with

this

point of view and will attempt to outline some supporting reasons for it. The most obvious reason that has had a noticeable impact on people’s lives is

that

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making distant and remote places around the world accessible in just several hours.

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, years before appearing

this

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air

plans, people were not able to travel to very far continents and countries.

As a result

, in case of any new innovations or discoveries or improvements in some parts of the world, spreading and revealing of those could have taken months or years to reach

to

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the furthest places. That’s why in the past people who lived in far sites, did not have enough supply of medicine and cure for some diseases, which had already

cured

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in some other nations.

Furthermore

,

this

unimaginable victory leads to the economic growth rapidly. It is a way to gain access and make

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a connection

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connection

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to other

countries

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countries'

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businesses.

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, some local companies can figure out a way to expand their limits and go beyond their nations’ borders which brings progression in those particular fields of businesses which

contribute

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to the growth of

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the economic

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economic

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economy

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nationally and internationally. To summarize, I believe that

advancement

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the advancement

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of technology is inevitable and people

is

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far better

instead

of to avoid it,

embrace

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it positively and

move

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along with it, finding solutions for drawbacks that may come with these advancements.