Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree.

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modern era, it is considered that social

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deeply influenced

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. Some people argue that social sites and

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have negatively affected

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as well as individuals while others oppose them. I would like to give my own view on

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heated argument; everyone had a negative impact on social applications.

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is a technology era and a person who is not using social

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is not able to compete with

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. Using social

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, as all the business and official deals are done via different

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, official meetings and transactions are

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executed by using different online

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,school all the administrative work is managed and updated by using the Punjab SIS app. Supervisors of the institute have to connect to the internet to get the latest emails from higher authorities.

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will not only reduce the cost of management but

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made the transmission of orders faster than a manual system. By keeping

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advantages every field is launching its own

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to work efficiently.

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, excessive

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of anything is bad for health. Overuseuse of social

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has made people addicted. The public is more introverted due to the extra

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of mobile phones and the latest technology.

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does not like to spend leisure time with each other. Rather than spending their time playing online games and making videos on Tiktok, people should enjoy the company of their fellows. To exemplify, a large number of users died every year due to selfies fever by accidents. To elucidate more, for the sake of popularity on social

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young generation is doing some unethical activities, which do not suit a civilized

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trend should be banned and there should be moderate

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of social

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. In conclusion, it is needless to say social

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is part of our lives. Advancement of technology has made our lives much easier and cheaper than earlier and the launching of new

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thriving which is officially beneficial for us. Meanwhile, the extra

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of social

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bad effect on

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, which should be minimized to some level.

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