In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Nowadays, in most ,countries junk
food
becomes more accessible for people
because the food
is low priced. This
has positive effects on the economy of a country but there are also
negative consequences for the environment and giving people
health issues.
On the one hand, Change noun form
people's
people
like to spend their money in Correct your spelling
restaurants
restuarants
. Correct your spelling
restaurants
for example
: by making food
cheaper and available for people
to buy. The demand for this
type of Correct your spelling
restaurants
restuarants
becomes high and Correct your spelling
restaurant
therefore
, there are building more and more fast food
Correct your spelling
restaurants
restuarants
. Those Correct your spelling
restaurants
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restaurants
restuarants
need staff to work for them. That provided more jobs and Correct your spelling
restaurants
that is
good for the economy.
On the other ,hand all the cheap food
comes with a price. The most important is the effect on the environment. For example
the cost of producing beef burgers. The consequences are the need for more cows to make those burgers. The cows need space, food
and they produce a lot of nitrogen. That put extra pressure on the greenhouse effect. Correct word choice
and food
Also
fast Add a comma
,Also
food
is not healthy food
. They are made very quickly and contain a lot of fat and sugar. For ,example a burger with fries is more than 1000 calories. The fries come out of a deep fryer and contain a lot of salt. The bun with the burger has a different kinds
of sauces on it that are very high in calories. By eating junk Correct the article-noun agreement
a different kind
different kinds
food
people
can get high blood pressure and problems with overweight.
In ,conclusion cheap food
comes with a price. Especially, the environment having trouble with adjusting. Being overweight and having health problems cost the economy to take care of the sick.Submitted by annemariebloemberg on
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