In many countries good schools and medical facilities only available in cities. Some people believe that new teachers and doctors should work in rural area for few years, but some think everyone should be free to choose where they work, discuss both and give opinion.

It is thought that most experts in the sphere of studying and medication are located in cities while in rural
areas
they are few. Some say that new
teachers
and doctors have to
work
in rural
areas
for a few years and
then
they can relocate their
work
to the
city
, while others say that, they should choose on their own where they will
work
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both opinions. On the one hand,
graduates
who have just graduated from the university don't have enough experience in working, they have only theoretical knowledge, not practical, so, for
this
reason, they should
work
in rural
areas
to get experience and after that, they can move to the
city
.
However
, as the
graduates
who have just finished their courses in university, they have fresh knowledge which they should apply in practice in good conditions, should be available all-new technologies for their
further
thrive in their chosen area. At the same time, if all
graduates
will
work
in the
city
, it means that competition among
graduates
will grow, and at the same time, in villages, there would be fewer employees. For these reasons,
students
should
work
in the village for a few years, and after they can use their knowledge in an appropriate way, they can move to the
city
for career growth.
On the other hand
, if
students
will have a chance of choosing, most of them will choose to
work
in the
city
, for that several reasons, as the salary is higher than in rural
areas
, the condition of living and job applications are
also
available for career growth. But, if all
students
choose to
work
in the
city
, it will make a huge impact on villages, because if they did not have well-educated
teachers
and the number of
teachers
is low, it would mean that more families would move to the
city
. The more people in the
city
, the more it is hard to live in good conditions,
also
last
but not the least, if most
students
arrived in the
city
, competition among them would grow on job applications. From my point of view, new
teachers
and doctors should
work
in the place where they come from, in
this
case, problems with competition in cities would be solved and
further
would make the living condition better in rural
areas
as well.
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