Scintefic progress has a great influence on society.Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

Since the
first
inventions were made, humans have been affected a lot during the
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journey.
however
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this
huge impact has some dark sides but it has
chenged
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changed
our lives in a good way in many fields and aspects. For
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instance
instence
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no one can deny the improvements in
healthcare
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system and making our lives easier than before.
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convienced
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convinced
that changes
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are made by
science
have helped us a lot in
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way and in
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will put some
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to prove it.
Firstly
the
sciense
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science
has made every process more
efficent
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efficient
than before. And it has been proved that if we use
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science
in every aspect of our lives, it will accelerate the process and make it faster and easier. One clear example is the
trasportation
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transportation
system. It can be seen clearly that
nowdays
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the speed of
transfering
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transferring
to our destinations is
more
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faster than before.
consequently
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we spend less time just
for
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transportation so we get less
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frustrated
than before and that can leads to us,
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much longer in comparison to past generations.
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the new inventions in health diagnosis processes have the same result and help us to cure our diseases and live for a longer period.
secondly
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before the start of
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actual
science
,
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society had been full of
rumers
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rumours
which were obstacles to the truth.
Therefore
people were suffering from incorrect ways of living which were
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the results
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results
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result
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of using
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the not
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not
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no
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scientific methodology in the whole world.
For instance
, the so-called chemists of that era were spending time
to convert
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copper to gold because of the
rumers
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rumours
, whereas they should have
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on
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more practical knowledge-based fields.
Hence
people did not make any development for years. So it is clear that if
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people used pure
science
they would feel
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sense of
fullfilment
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fulfilment
. in
conclusion
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the
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science
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progress has made our
life
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lives
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longer, healthier,
more
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and more
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efficiant
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efficient
. And
particulary
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particularly
we can achieve our goals
easyier
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easier
as an effect of that. So
i
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can definitely say that it has a huge positive impact.
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