Nowadays many people spend a lot of money for sport and cultural events

In recent years it has become far more normal for
people
to spend more money on things particularly entertaining ones
such
as sports or cultural
events
in the developed world. In my opinion,
this
has both beneficial and adverse sides in equal measure. On the one hand, nowadays, these kinds of things are not merely
events
a number of
people
treat them as an opportunity to have fun. Enjoyment is the priority during festival times.
Besides
relaxing they are good ways of releasing stress or long-term beneficial memories. Sometimes individual's strong passion for something pursues them to spend a lot. I can give my cousin as an example, several years ago one of the most well-known motivators Nick Vujicic came to Uzbekistan. My cousin was a great fan of
this
person in order to listen to the motivational speech he bought tickets despite being overestimated.
Furthermore
, these affairs attract numerous
people
from various tracks of life which provides a perfect chance for
people
to unite and bond. There are several married couples who met each other in the cinemas or at concerts.
However
, I agree with those who argue that the cost of these
events
is overpriced. Funds spent on them are a complete waste of money.
Instead
of investing huge amounts of money,
people
should make their quality of life much better by buying new houses or apartments with good amenities.
In addition
, it is
also
insecure taking into consideration modern theatres related to terrorism. A number of terroristic organizations choose these
events
as their targets. In conclusion, we shouldn't be extravagant and living in monotonous lifestyle is
also
bad. We should keep a balance between them.
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