Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, exchanging international
students
is debatable.
Although
there is a number of benefits to
this
trend, I believe the drawbacks involved are more. On the plus side, the advantages for
schools
, which the most
students
there are international, are manifold.
To begin
with, they can approve many applicants from many countries whose
students
cannot study at high-level
schools
.
Thus
, they probably cannot become an expert in future when the level of competition goes up more and more, and
this
inequality could be a crisis all over the world. Take Iran's education system which can not be helpful for many teenagers as the most patently obvious example; one Iranian student can achieve more quality learning in abroad than their homeland. Cultural diversity,
furthermore
, could it be the
second
positive factor that
schools
gain it. In most cases, there is obvious that when various cultures and traditions come together the results could be better.
However
, exchanging international
students
has serious consequences. The most axiomatic argument is a financial problem.
that is
to say, when
schools
have international
students
, they probably have to expend more money compared to domestic
schools
. Considering that most of the
students
migrate without their parents, providing suitable chambers for them will a lot cost.
for instance
, building a usual accommodation with common equipment, that must construct near the school's building, might cost an arm and a leg.
Moreover
, more international
students
lead to hiring
the
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more experts. They strive to help teenagers to avoid mental disorders stemming from their age or their distance from the homeland, and
also
to tackle different languages. In conclusion, regardless of benefits, I think resulting of international student exchange can be more problematic for all
schools
as their financial problems and hiring experts.
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