People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter, describe the problems, explain how it is affecting people, say what the company should do to help

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to express my frustration about the

internet

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connectivity that all the people are experiencing in my area.

Firstly

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, I am facing a problem in which the

internet

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stops frequently every hour, and

besides

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that speed of the

internet

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fluctuates so, drastically that it is very hard to use the

internet

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connection for doing some of my office work at my home.

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, individuals are not able to talk properly with his/her child who is living in a foreign country.

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, people are not able to do video calls to any of their relatives and apart from that, people have to go to another place just to use the

internet

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, the company can arrange for any master technician in my area to solve

this

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problem, and the technician can

also

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check if anything is damaged in the distribution signal tower.

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, it would be a great help if you solve the problem on an urgent basis. Looking forward to a positive and prompt response. Yours sincerely, Shah Harshil

harshil31099

Dec 15, 2022

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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