Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disgree.

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It is stated by some people that it could be beneficial for adolescents and society at the same

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to ask them to do voluntary work in their spare

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. I agree with

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statement and I believe

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practice is completely advantageous. In

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essay, I explain my mindset. Most teenagers are free more than other age ranges, so some people recommended adolescents can participate in unpaid activities.

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could bring various advantages.

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, teens usually suffer from a lack of enough self-confidence to make friends or communicate with others. Because they have not been in a society with different people a lot. If they are volunteers to help a government organisation or even paint some schools' walls, they would have

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opportunity to be involved in a group, which could improve their self-esteem in several ways.

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, I use to be shy because I spent a huge part of my

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at the home, But after joining a group at a charity, I became socialized.

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, all the nations have several issues which cannot be tackled unless by great human resources and paying their salaries might lead the government into an economical problem.

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, these types of jobs are not well-paid.

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adults are not interested in them. Here teens can play a significant role in rescuing the country from an obstacle by working for them without giving them any money.

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, cleaning urban space could not be done with limited employees working in related organisations. But if underages hold a group in their neighbourhood, the process of cleaning streets will be executed faster. Teenagers are a fresh and energetic community whose social skills have not developed properly yet. Doing free work in their leisure

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can benefit them in experiencing communication and assist society in

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a better environment.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

305 words

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disgree.

Include an introduction and conclusion

There seems to be increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than Continual assessments. What are advantages and disadvantage?

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One of the consquences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantacges of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?