You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighbourhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the changing rooms. Write to the gym manager. In your letter: explain who you are describe the problem exactly make suggestions to improve the gym

Dear Mr Smith, I recently moved to
this
beautiful city and started looking for a place to exercise.
Then
, I heard so many good reviews about your gym and I decided to be a member of your club.
Moreover
, a month ago, I enrolled myself in
this
gym.
Furthermore
, I really like the infrastructure, workout types of equipment and space to perform physical activities.
However
, I started noticing that some people after practising leave the exercise machines cover in sweat patches and do not even wipe out these machines especially the benches and seats after using them. The
second
thing that comes into concern, is that a few members leave the changing rooms unhygienic after using them
for example
, forget the used towels on the benches rather than throwing them in the laundry basket.
Lastly
, these situations are happening at a concerning level and I would appreciate it if the management will apply the rules strictly and punish the culprit. Thank you I look forward to hearing from you Yours Sincerely Sandeep Kaur
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