Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers, while others disagree. What is your opinion?
It is undoubtedly true that
TV
advertisement has brought prominent changes to mankind’s life in recent decades. What is significant is the fact that TV
advertising is one of the most useful ways to advertise a new good or product. Meanwhile, many people have said that this
method is not useful for the audience whereas other people say that it was useful for them. The following essay tends to explore the reasons for it such
as finding suitable tools for work as well playing too much of advertisements on TV
.
It is an undeniable fact that some workers are in lack efficient tools which they can be found in a
Correct the article-noun agreement
TV advertisements
a TV advertisement
TV
advertisements. Nowadays, constructing a building has become a complicated operation due to considering many aspects. Besides
, the equipment that is
needed to construct a building must be professional. In addition
, the TV
is one of the most used gadgets worldwide. Thus
, by advertising a needed gear on TV
not only the seller can make a good amount of money but also
the worker can build a stable and secure house.
On the other hand
, not all commercial videos
are useful for the community and sometimes they can be annoying. In cinemas or life, shows there are often seen that commercial videos
pop up in the middle of the show which for the community it can be boring and irritating. In addition
, the product that is
advertised may not be useful for the audience which makes it more irritating for viewers. As an example, on ,YouTube it is often seen that they cut the show and start playing irrelevant commercial videos
which makes
the person nervous or irritated. Change the verb form
make
Thus
, not all of the goods or products that are advertised, are useful for viewers.
In conclusion, I state that not only me but also
many people are dissatisfied with these types of videos
in TV
programs. It is suggested that advertisements should be played on special websites so those who are looking for the product themselves can find them easily.Submitted by snazari2006 on
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