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Some people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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 the less
work
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 efficiency in old
age
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, some argue that
people
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 above the
age
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 of 65 should not be allowed to
work
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. Others,
however
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, believe that it is
one
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's personal preference that individuals should have the right to
work
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 as long as they want to do it. At
this
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 juncture, both these views are analysed in the ensuing paragraphs,
while
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 I believe the former party is right. To start with, humans start to get weak as they get old. At a young
age
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,
people
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 have the most potential and energy to
work
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. They quickly learn new things and perform tasks very efficiently. With
age
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, humans start to lose energy and they lose the potential to
work
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.
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, a young and energetic person will be a lot more beneficial for a company compared to a 60-year-old man.
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, some
people
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 believe that
people
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 above the
age
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 of 65 should not be allowed to
work
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 and they should relax in the
last
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 years of their
life
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.
On the other hand
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, many other
people
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 including me believe that it is the right of humans to choose how long they want to
work
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. To choose to
work
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 or not
work
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 is a personal choice. If
one
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 thinks he is physically fit and has an opportunity to
work
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then
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 he should.
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, if a 50-year-old man thinks he has done enough in his
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 and he should retire, it's his personal choice.
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, most
people
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 are used to working as they have done all their
life
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 which keeps them busy. If they stop doing their regular
work
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 and will not keep their minds busy it can have mental effects.
To conclude
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, though in old
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people
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 are less efficient in working, no
one
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 should force them to stop working. To
work
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 or not
work
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 is
one
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's personal choice and he should decide what he wants to do with his
life
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.
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