‎ Some young people leave the countryside to live in cities or towns, leaving only ‎older people in the countryside. What are the problems of this issue? What can ‎be done to solve this problem?‎

Nowadays, the population of

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is increasing rapidly worldwide. The young generations tend to move to towns and

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so only the elderly stay in rural

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. In

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essay, I will discuss overpopulation in

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as a negative result of

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trend and its potential solutions.

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, the main repercussion of

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development is the overcrowded population in urban

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which can be polluted. These days, the number of citizens is continuously extending,

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the number of

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who live in the

countryside

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is becoming fewer, which can cause excessive environmental problems around the

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.

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, only older

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tend to live in these rural

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.

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, today, more than half of the Mongolian population lives in Ulaanbaatar, the capital city of Mongolia, causing a significant amount of pollution. The more young adults move to urban towns, the more problems will arise in the ecosystem.

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, developing the infrastructure of towns and

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in suburban

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is one of the optimal solutions. In the

countryside

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, the chance of being educated and getting a job is far less than in developed

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. The government should focus on the construction of universities and buildings in order to encourage young

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to live in the

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. If there are more colleges and employers,

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, young adults will stay in rural

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to live a better life without any obstacles.

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, making a sustainable working and living environment will solve

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problem. In conclusion, an increased density of citizens and a few

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of

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who live in the

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will deteriorate the environment. The potential solution would be improvements in the infrastructure of rural

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.