‎ Some young people leave the countryside to live in cities or towns, leaving only ‎older people in the countryside. What are the problems of this issue? What can ‎be done to solve this problem?‎

Nowadays, the population of
cities
is increasing rapidly worldwide. The young generations tend to move to towns and
cities
so only the elderly stay in rural
areas
. In
this
essay, I will discuss overpopulation in
cities
as a negative result of
this
trend and its potential solutions.
Firstly
, the main repercussion of
this
development is the overcrowded population in urban
areas
which can be polluted. These days, the number of citizens is continuously extending,
whereas
the number of
people
who live in the
countryside
is becoming fewer, which can cause excessive environmental problems around the
cities
.
In addition
, only older
people
tend to live in these rural
areas
.
For instance
, today, more than half of the Mongolian population lives in Ulaanbaatar, the capital city of Mongolia, causing a significant amount of pollution. The more young adults move to urban towns, the more problems will arise in the ecosystem.
Secondly
, developing the infrastructure of towns and
cities
in suburban
areas
is one of the optimal solutions. In the
countryside
, the chance of being educated and getting a job is far less than in developed
cities
. The government should focus on the construction of universities and buildings in order to encourage young
people
to live in the
countryside
. If there are more colleges and employers,
for example
, young adults will stay in rural
areas
to live a better life without any obstacles.
Hence
, making a sustainable working and living environment will solve
this
problem. In conclusion, an increased density of citizens and a few
number
Change to a plural noun
numbers
show examples
of
people
who live in the
countryside
will deteriorate the environment. The potential solution would be improvements in the infrastructure of rural
areas
.
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