The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The provided line graph denotes the
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
who travelled to a Caribbean Use synonyms
island
and their choices of stay during the visit from 2010 to 2017.
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Overall
, the total Linking Words
number
of travellers has increased over 7 years. Use synonyms
Besides
, the lowest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
was in 2010 Use synonyms
while
the highest from 2017.
In 2010, one Linking Words
million
tourists visited the Use synonyms
island
, and around 300,000 of them stayed on ships, Use synonyms
while
the rest decided to stay on the Linking Words
island
. Use synonyms
However
, in the next Linking Words
year
the total Add a comma
,year
number
of lands side Use synonyms
visitors
increased to 500000. Use synonyms
As a result
, the total Linking Words
number
inclined to 1 Use synonyms
million
. In 2012, the Use synonyms
number
of voyages reduced back to the lowest of around 0.4 and recovered back in 2013. Use synonyms
On the other hand
Linking Words
number
of travellers on the Use synonyms
island
, increased and reached its highest of 1.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2013 and remained at the same level up until 2015.
In the period 2015 and 2016, the total Use synonyms
number
of tourists remained unchanged at 2.75 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, there was a slight drop in people who stayed on land which was around 1.25 Linking Words
million
. Use synonyms
Finally
, the total Linking Words
number
of travellers jumped to the highest of 3.5 Use synonyms
million
, because both Use synonyms
Island
Use synonyms
visitors
and ship guests crossed significantly.Use synonyms
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