Eventually , technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world face today. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In
this
contemporary era,
technology
has increased at an alarming rate . It
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that
technology
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various solutions for major environmental issues,
while
other believe that the invention of new devices is having a negative impact on the
environment
. In my opinion, I completely agree with the former statement .
To begin
with,
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technology
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crucial role in everyone's life. First and foremost is that
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most companies and individuals are using paper
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usage of
computer
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computers
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,
laptop
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and
smart phones
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, where businesses are even sending their own bills, receipts and personal documents by
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to save both money and paper.
Secondly
, the invention of
electrical
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cars
are
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surely advantageous and helpful to solve International problems called air pollution .
For example
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taken by the Time of USA newspaper , in America , in 2016, was that 84% of the majority
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using
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advance
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technology
to solve these issues .
On the other hand
,
technology
has
also
gave a bad effect on our
environment
.
Firstly
, cutting of trees to construct new buildings , which
disturb
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the nature of
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environment
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cycle.
Secondly
, over
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of petrol and diesel
that
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create
the
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pollution
such
as noise population , which gives a negative impact on
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health.
Thirdly
,
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of plastic , which is
non-recycled
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product and
it
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is not absorbed by the soil. For illustrate, the
Time
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of
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New York newspaper, in
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, in 1017, was that modern
technology
has heightened from 64% to 87% in the past 7 years.
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conclusion , after deliberating all the positive factors of
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the environmental problems .
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modern devices
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a
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numerous way to solve their daily life issues, Yet, it is
also
has a negative effect on
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the environment
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and health.
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