Eventually , technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world face today. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In
this
contemporary era, technology
has increased at an alarming rate . It is often argue
that Change the verb form
is often argued
technology
provide
various solutions for major environmental issues, Change the verb form
provides
while
other believe that the invention of new devices is having a negative impact on the environment
. In my opinion, I completely agree with the former statement .
To begin
with, adavance
Correct your spelling
advanced
advance
technology
plays an
crucial role in everyone's life. First and foremost is thatChange the article
a
,
most companies and individuals are using paper Remove the comma
apply
due to
this
usage of Correct determiner usage
the
computer
, Fix the agreement mistake
computers
laptop
and Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
smart phones
, where businesses are even sending their own bills, receipts and personal documents by Correct your spelling
smartphones
emails
to save both money and paper. Fix the agreement mistake
email
Secondly
, the invention of electrical
cars Replace the word
electric
are
surely advantageous and helpful to solve International problems called air pollution . Change the verb form
is
For example
, a survey was
taken by the Time of USA newspaper , in America , in 2016, was that 84% of the majority Unnecessary verb
apply
is
using Correct subject-verb agreement
are
a
Remove the article
apply
advance
Replace the word
advanced
technology
to solve these issues .
On the other hand
, technology
has also
gave a bad effect on our environment
. Firstly
, cutting of trees to construct new buildings , which disturb
the nature of Correct subject-verb agreement
disturbs
Correct article usage
the environment
environment
cycle. Replace the word
environmental
Secondly
, over usages
of petrol and diesel Fix the agreement mistake
usage
that
create Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
pollution Correct article usage
apply
such
as noise population , which gives a negative impact on human's
health. Change noun form
human
Thirdly
, Correct article usage
the usages
usages
of plastic , which is Replace the word
use
non-recycled
product and Add an article
a non-recycled
the non-recycled
it
is not absorbed by the soil. For illustrate, the Correct pronoun usage
apply
Time
Fix the agreement mistake
Times
of
New York newspaper, in Change preposition
apply
American
, in 1017, was that modern Replace the word
America
technology
has heightened from 64% to 87% in the past 7 years.
To
conclusion , after deliberating all the positive factors of Change preposition
In
solve
the environmental problems . Change the verb form
solving
Although
,
modern devices Remove the comma
apply
has
Change the verb form
have
a
numerous way to solve their daily life issues, Yet, it is Correct article usage
apply
also
has a negative effect on environment
and health.Correct article usage
the environment
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