The pie charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Oman and Spain in 2005 and projections for 2055.
The four pie charts provide information about the
population
ages in two countries - Spain
and Oman
in 2005 and also
the prediction for 2055. There are 3 categories of ages ( children
, adults
and elder people
).
Overall
, Oman
tends to be a country of mostly elder people
with just a tiny percentage of adults
in 2055, while
Spain
, on the opposite, is going to have almost half of its population
in the 15 to 59 years
gap.
In 2005, Oman
had an even number of elder people
and children
with 48 % each, while
adults
were just 4% of the whole population
. On the other side, Spain
used to have an overwhelming majority of people
over 60 years
old at 62%, citizens under 14 years
and between 15 and 59 were just over a third of the population
, with 14 and 24 per cent respectively.
In 2055, Oman
will be more like Spain
in the first year with 57% of elder people
and 37% of children
. The number of adults
will not change significantly with only a 2% increase to 6% in total. Meanwhile, Spain
will have a nearly similar number of people
between 15 and 59 and people
over 60 years
old, but the percentage of children
will stay relatively low at 12% of the population
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