There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it with examples.

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view that nowadays the trend of the high volume of blast in our life.there are so many ways to reduce

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view which is substantially the first and foremost reason is that traffic congestion in

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modern era there is a lot of development in

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driving cars or motorbikes they always use to blow their horn even if they do not have reason to blow the horn but they use to create crash pollution on the roads

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could be mostly commotion in traffic areas and small jams.,

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could be polluted buzz culture.

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government should have to take strict action against the people who create unusual turbulence on road or in

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,traffic police should make a law in the community that after 9 or 10 pm restrictions to blow horns in the public

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stop playing DJs at night in the community as well.

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, the government should have to hold a campus in public to stop turbulence pollution and they must have to give pamphlets or give ads on tv as well to stop cry pollution.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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284 words

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There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it with examples.

Your opinion

the process of Pu-erh Raw tea and Ripe tea. make a summary regarding the given diagram

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Some people think that a sense or competetion in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.