There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it with examples.
In
this
contemporary epoch,there is a heated argument over this
view that nowadays the trend of the high volume of blast in our life.there are so many ways to reduce this
problem.However
both views will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs with logical conclusions.
There is adequate evidence for Add a comma
,However
this
view which is substantially the first and foremost reason is that traffic congestion in this
modern era there is a lot of development in this
nation such
as even individual
who do not have money can buy their vehicles in Fix the agreement mistake
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instalment
.Adding more to it Fix the agreement mistake
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while
driving cars or motorbikes they always use to blow their horn even if they do not have reason to blow the horn but they use to create crash pollution on the roads this
could be mostly commotion in traffic areas and small jams.,Additionally
younger people use toAdd a comma
,Additionally
tolisten
loud music and DJ at home Correct your spelling
to listen
listen
this
could be polluted buzz culture.
On the other hand
to stop this
clamor
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the world
Moreover
,traffic police should make a law in the community that after 9 or 10 pm restrictions to blow horns in the public as well as
stop playing DJs at night in the community as well.Furthermore
, the government should have to hold a campus in public to stop turbulence pollution and they must have to give pamphlets or give ads on tv as well to stop cry pollution.
To conclude
,in my ,opinion individual
should have to understand and take responsibility to stop Fix the agreement mistake
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However
,if the public makes it possible to stop turbulence and live a noiseless life then
definitely one day we succeed.Submitted by sharma1997.rahulthakur on
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