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You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • apologies for what happened • explain why you missed the deadline • tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to apologise for the company’s loss by losing one of its class-A clients. I tried my best to complete the
project
 but I could not make it and because of that, I am feeling bad. Actually, as you know one of my workmates who was leading
this
project
 was not feeling well
due to
 COVID-19, he took 6-7 weeks of leave during the
last
 days of working on the
project
. So, our team was out of
the
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track during that period of
time
.
Moreover
, my team and I tried doing the
project
 in the 2 weeks but we could not finish it
due to
 the short
time
 which we were left with. I would definitely try next
time
 to complete the task in
time
 by doing some follow-up and overtime to keep our records up to date. I hope we will continue to get more clients, so that will apply our loss. I hope that our organization keep growing at the fastest pace and keep getting more clients. Yours Sincerely, Tinotenda
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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