Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The current
development
of
robots
plays significant
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human’s
future
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there are some controversies which
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might be disastrous for
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race. There are valid opinions on both sides which I will discuss below.
First,
the advantage of
robots
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development
in the
future
is a lot of human
works
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will be easier with the help of
robots
. It is true that nowadays
humans
have used a lot of machinery for their activities for working and studying. With the
development
of
robots
in the
future
, more jobs can be done with the help of these machines.
Then
, the robot’s developments will help
humans
to do extreme activities that can not be done with natural human bodies.
For example
, if there is a big fire incident
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cannot reach,
then
robots
will help the firefighters to extinguish the flames and maybe help some lives.
On the other hand
, others would think that
robots
might danger
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future
and bring disadvantageous
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community
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.
Robots
, which considerate can do more
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efficiently, are a threat to most people who work with their physical abilities. These kinds of work are industrial
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workers
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, administrative employees, and other regular jobs with common daily
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. If
robots
took their jobs, all of these workers would be unemployed and hard to find another job. Another disadvantage of
robots
development
in the
future
is it could make
humans
become lazier. With the fact that
robots
could do more tasks efficiently, it would be possible for
humans
to become lazy and do nothing.
To conclude
, the
development
of
robots
would be very helpful for human’s daily activities. People should not be cautious with these
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as long as
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society
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with responsibilities.
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  • Artificial intelligence
  • Automation
  • Technological advancements
  • Workforce displacement
  • Ethical considerations
  • Innovation
  • Labor market
  • Safety protocols
  • Machine learning
  • Human-robot interaction
  • Economic impact
  • Job creation
  • Cybersecurity
  • Autonomous
  • Precision
  • Dependency
  • Regulation
  • Risk assessment
  • Adaptation
  • Unemployment
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