Some people believe that excessive use of modern technologies, such as computers and smartphones, is negatively affecting the reading and writing skills of our young people. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The over usage of highly developed
technology
has become an educational argument, especially when it regards the young generation. Many people hold the opinion that the reading and writing abilities of school-age children, can become affected in a negative way. Those who disagree point out that modern technology
is an integrated and unavoidable part of our present and future.
We must acknowledge that modern technology
took over the world. Nevertheless
, the older generation argues that children who use smart devices excessively, lose the ability to develop their writing skills
. Daily usage of computers or smartphones, for example
by typing over handwriting, naturally becomes their preference. In addition
, the
grammar can be self-corrected by intelligent programs. Correct article usage
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As a result
, there is no need of learning the rules of writing. Not only writing but also
reading skills
can be affected by clever “machines.” After all, who would be bothered reading when all the knowledge from books can be read aloud back to them by virtual authors.
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Although
it is hard to compete with the above arguments, some people disagree with the negativity related to modern technology
. Even if the reading and writing skills
are affected by the usage of smart devices in a minor way, the advantage of it is far way more beneficial for growing adolescents. In particular
, those who struggle with their writing or reading skills
can benefit from supportive programs, such
as Grammarly or Autocorrect. Also
, reading can be improved by some computer programs and exercises. Therefore
, there is no need to limit yourself to the choices that the modern world of technology
gives us.
In conclusion, both aspects have some benefits and drawbacks, but I agree that technology
tools can support and improve young people’s language skills
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