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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009
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The chart indicates
students
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 who
transfered
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transferred
 from
Europe
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 universities to
Australia
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 and the opposite. It shows the total
number
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 of
the
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apply
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students
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 who changed their
university
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universities
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 through two different periods 2007, and 2009.
Also
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, it provided the
Europe
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 countries which it is France, Sweden, the UK, Germany, and
Netherland
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Netherlands
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.
Overall
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, the study illustrates the
amount
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number
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 of
students
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 who changed their
university
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universities
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during
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between
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 2007 and 2009.
Further
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, the
number
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 of
exchanged
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exchange
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students
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 from
Europe
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 colleges to
Australia
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 in 2007 was higher than
who
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those who
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transfered
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transferred
 from
Australia
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 to
Europe
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. In 2009
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Australia
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Australia's
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 total
number
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 increased sharply
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on
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 the other hand,
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Europe
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Europe's
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number
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 remained stable.
According to
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 data, in 2007 61 France
studnets
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students
 changed their university to
Australia
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 and in 2009 it
acheived
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achieved
 60.
Following
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this
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,
Sweden
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in Sweden
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 in 2007 34 and there was a rise of
exchanged
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exchange
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students
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 reaching 42 , and The UK decreased their
number
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 in 2009. To
illusrtate
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illustrate
, the total
number
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 of European
students
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were
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was
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 189 in 2007 and with
the
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a
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 growth
226
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of 226
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.
However
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,
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Australia
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Australian
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 numbers remained stable in 2007 as in 2009

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, europe, australia, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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