Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependant on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss and give your own opinion.

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we can't do everything alone but we need help,

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it is thought that society has more freedom in acting alone. In my, opinion humans don't need another one to know something or to do what they want.

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essay will discuss both views. Those who argue that people rely on people usually because of a simple fact

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as family,

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in the USA member of a family who is between the group age 20-30 years old are still treated as children and their parents pay everything for them and let them live in the same house,

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to Japan who is forced to live alone in another house. Another reason is that we need someone who produces coffee and

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scientist, doctors, economist, psychologists etc for our health and daily routine.

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of artificial intelligence advancement and technological devices every task and knowledge can be accessed with just one click leading us to be smarter and less lean on others.

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somewhat become independent regarding their personal lives. Young people are more self-sufficient than their former generation since they can settle down on themselves at a pretty young age.

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, as globalization grows apace with burgeoning employment prospects, youngers probably sustain themselves financially without subsidies from their parents. All things considered, I support the idea, claiming that populations are more independent from each other, but are getting more dependent on electronic devices.