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the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country betweeb 2011 and 2018

the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country betweeb 2011 and 2018
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The line graphs below compare the
number
 of stores which is shut down already and the
number
 of new stores that were established in one nation from 2011 until 2018.
Overall
, it is can be observed that both of closures and openings department store graph experienced fluctuation throughout the period time given. The closures
shop
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 was extremely plummeted
at
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in
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 some
year
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years
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 compared with the openings
shop
maintain
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maintained
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 the
number
 of it which
is
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apply
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steady for a few years. Starting with, the closures
shop
 had been fluctuated throughout the period of time,
at
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with
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 7,000
shops
 in 2013
was
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as
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 the highest
number
, and followed by 6,500 in 2014, 6,300 in 2011, respectively. Surprisingly, in 2015 it plummeted to almost 0 in 2015 and
restart
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grewing
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growing
until 2018. With regard to, the new
shops
, 8,500
shop
 was the largest proportion in 2011, and followed by 6,000
shops
 in 2014, and 5000
shops
 in 2013, respectively. Interestingly, in 2018 the
number
 was drop dramatically to 3,000 in 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shop, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "plummeted" was used 2 times.
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