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5.6. Some people think that robots are very important for humans' future development. Others, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many difficult and heavy tasks are almost done by
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 in many different jobs
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 as IT, manufacturing or even driving.
Robots
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 are believed to be very important for humans in the future.
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, the opposite claim that the existence of
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 can bring negative effects on society. The development of humans can not dismiss the huge benefit of robot invention. First and foremost, high-advanced technology saves an incredible amount of time and effort for us to do many things. A washing machine,
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, only needs to be set up at the start and after that, we have no need to do anything until the washing is done. What’s more,
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 are now fully installed in many industries like cars, medicine, coke or food,... so the speed, accuracy and safety are absolutely ensured and it can be a good signal to the economy. Rising production and a decrease in spending are two of the most important conditions that can provide the motivation for many companies to develop.
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, the fear of the bad effects of
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 is completely well-founded. We rely too much on the artificial intelligence of
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 that we are not able to do some very easy work.
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, many people are not ready for bad circumstances
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 as when
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 are broken or when electricity is cut and
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 can not run.
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, the increasing installation of
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 is the cause of the downturn of the labour market. Many workers have been altered by a lot of technological facilities and it is a really big problem that many governments have to concern about. In conclusion, we are now living in a century in that artificial intelligence and
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 become common. And
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 many advantages have been brought since the first time
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 were invented, they
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 bring some disadvantages to society.
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