Write a letter to your local council that the road infront of your house is damaged.

Dear Sir/Ma, I am writing to inform you about the
road
in front of my
house
which has been damaged. My name is Awosika Florence living at number 1, Ajanlekoko Street, off Idiroko Street, Ajangbadi Lagos. I will like to inform you about the damaged
road
in front of my
house
which has
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caused some damage to my vehicle. I have been unable to drive my car out
as a result
of the damage caused by the bad
road
in front of my
house
as my bumper is out and I have a leakage underneath my car because the potholes on the
road
are so deep. I will like the local council to help look into the issue to ensure that the damaged
road
is fixed so I will be able to drive out of my
house
easily. Looking forward to your prompt response. Yours Faithfully, Awosika Florence.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
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  • even though
  • despite

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