some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.why is this case?Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In the modern world,
children
tend to spend a lot of time on their smartphones daily. The reason would be single-child development and financial problems that families are involved in. There are benefits and drawbacks in Use synonyms
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essay will discuss which one outweighs the others.
In the electronic era where humans surrounding by different kinds of electronic devices like computers, tablets and state-of-art gadgets, youngsters find their interest in playing with these goods. The first reason is that nowadays parents prefer to have only one child and Linking Words
in contrast
to the past kids do not have siblings around to play with, so using electronic tools as entertaining devices is the best way to occupy them. Linking Words
Moreover
, the tuition rate of playhouses and kid's club is very high and increase noticeably every year that so many families can't afford to take their Linking Words
children
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As a result
, immatures stay at home and fill whole their spare time playing with their phones.
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way of living has a lot of disadvantages that lead Linking Words
children
to sit still for a long time and play. Use synonyms
As a consequence
, they will get weight and have health problems because they do not have physical activity. Linking Words
According to
research, the rate of obesity among the public particularly youngsters has raised significantly. Linking Words
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style of living will have a destructive effect on their behaviour Linking Words
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as anti-socialism and violence because they follow inappropriate and unacceptable behaviour patterns.If the contents of the games they play or cartoons they watch are brutal, it not only will make them violent and anxious but Linking Words
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will have harmful mental influences like learning or sleeping disorder.Linking Words
However
, there are plenty of applications free to download on these devices that are instructive and useful for Linking Words
children
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as language teaching or apps based on games and learning.
In conclusion, in the communication age, the method that people choose for living is not similar to the past and kids are no exception. Linking Words
Although
a new lifestyle has bright sides ,we can not ignore its demerits.Linking Words
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