In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
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weight
is one sign which can express how healthy you are; ,
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however
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weight
of people
in many countries at present. The economic crisis is the main problem of this
situation, and the Ministry
of Public Health
should be responsible for solving this
problem.
One of the most important problems is that many countries face economic issues since the COVID-19 pandemic has been spread out around the world for more than 3 years. This
can be the cause of people
's average weight
rising due to
people
could not go out to have more activities and also
when time returns back to a normal lifetime, people
get used to having the same behaviours
as eating and sleeping. For example
, according to
the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University, it revealed that 80% of people
who had been working from home in the last
3 years tend to have higher cholesterol levels and the waistline has increased. Having said that, the economic crisis plays a major role in unhealthy behaviours
.
In order to solve this
issue, the Ministry
of Public Health
should take action as soon as possible. The most significant solution to support this
is the fact that the Ministry
of public health
ought to promote and acknowledge people
about the dangers of being overweight. To illustrate this
, in recent news, it has been reported that 80% of people
who have an awareness of the drawback of being overweight tend to have better health
behaviours
such
as more exercise and choosing to have healthy food. By doing this
, the weight
is
declined to 45% compared to those who have not been encouraged by the campaigns.
In conclusion, being overweight is increasing in many countries, and Unnecessary verb
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people
abandon exercise or are aware of health
which can trigger serious health
problems; therefore
the Ministry
of public health
should promote and support people
to have more healthy behaviours
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