In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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is one sign which can express how healthy you are

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it is likely to have a higher average

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of

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in many countries at present. The economic crisis is the main problem of

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situation, and the

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should be responsible for solving

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problem. One of the most important problems is that many countries face economic issues since the COVID-19 pandemic has been spread out around the world for more than 3 years.

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can be the cause of

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rising

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people

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could not go out to have more activities and

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when time returns back to a normal lifetime,

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get used to having the same

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as eating and sleeping.

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the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University, it revealed that 80% of

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who had been working from home in the

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3 years tend to have higher cholesterol levels and the waistline has increased. Having said that, the economic crisis plays a major role in unhealthy

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. In order to solve

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issue, the

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of Public

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should take action as soon as possible. The most significant solution to support

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is the fact that the

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of public

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ought to promote and acknowledge

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about the dangers of being overweight. To illustrate

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, in recent news, it has been reported that 80% of

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who have an awareness of the drawback of being overweight tend to have better

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behaviours

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as more exercise and choosing to have healthy food. By doing

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declined to 45% compared to those who have not been encouraged by the campaigns. In conclusion, being overweight is increasing in many countries, and

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abandon exercise or are aware of

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which can trigger serious

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problems;

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the

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of public

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should promote and support

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to have more healthy

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